tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8679457768571800783.post4026808821372482060..comments2023-09-01T10:14:30.179+01:00Comments on Graeme's Fantasy Book Review: 'Shadowplay' - Tad WilliamsGraeme Floryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15411505049326440010noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8679457768571800783.post-70430006711686203482008-04-07T15:52:00.000+01:002008-04-07T15:52:00.000+01:00Graeme, can you help me with some plot points i'm ...Graeme, can you help me with some plot points i'm finding rather unnerving?<BR/>I'm halfway through Shadowplay (thanks to you), but i think i spotted an incongruency on the plot: in the end of page 582, King Olin is talking to Count Perivos, and in reply to something Perivos says to him about the Autarch, Olin grabs his arm and is completely surprised and shocked that the Autarch is trying to bargain for him with Hierosol's Lord Protector, to the point of saying: "But that makes no sense!"<BR/><BR/>But before, in page 376 to 380, King Olin is in the room when Drakava receives the Autarch's envoy with the same proposition, that he reads aloud, and afterwards Olin and Drakava discuss this bargain and the possible fate of Olin. <BR/>Am i going mad, or was it something that went below the radar of Mr. Williams otherwise fine writing, a problem not seen in revisions?<BR/><BR/>Thanks!!!<BR/>GasparGaspar Garçãohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01872119849158617667noreply@blogger.com